Your Business is a Cereal Box: Attract, then Inform

Cereal manufacturers know how to grab yourI vs. You
attention: bright colours, simple and compellingIn the features list above, notice how many times
messages ("Source of 5 essential nutrients!!!"),"I", "we", "our", "my", and "me" are used. People
catchy headlines. What about the ingredient listare naturally concerned with their own needs first.
with all the nutritional information? That's on theBy presenting them with a list of reasons why
side; easily found, but obviously secondary.you are so great, you are sending them the
The lesson: Ingredient lists don't sell cereal. Lookwrong message: that their needs are secondary
at your business features as you would theto what you think they should know. Don't make
nutritional information on a cereal box: people onlythe mistake of turning your marketing into a giant
look at it when they are already consideringrésumé of your accomplishments.
buying the box. It displays important informationUse words like "you" and "your" more often.
that needs to be communicated, but it does notBe your own client
answer the first questions in the client's mind.What do your clients look for? Try a little role
For service providers, marketing is a challenge:playing: Pretend you are your own prospective
you know your service is useful and has value,client and objectively evaluate your
but because you don't have a physical product,communication material.
the benefits may be harder to define. After all,Ask yourself: Would I buy from myself? What
your client will only experience what you do oncewould keep me interested? What am I looking
they actually hire you, which they won't do if thefor? What do I really want?
benefits of using your services are not convincing.Learn from how you search the web: If you
How will you, as a service professional, deal withwere looking for administrative help, would you be
this fact? You must communicate with yoursearching Google for "15 years of experience"?
clients by being focused on their needs first.Probably not. You would be more likely to search
Attract, then Informfor terms like "database entry" or "transcription
I notice that many of my clients put too muchservices". If that's what you look for, chances are
emphasis on what they do instead of emphasizingmost of your clients will do the same. Give them
why their audience should choose them over thewhat they want and organize your information
competition -- or choose them at all.accordingly.
Note these claims:As you create any communication material,
We offer a 90-day guaranteeanswer these questions:
I have over 15 years experience in my field ofWhat is the value of my service?
expertiseWhat distinct problem will my service solve?
I give 10% off all first-time buyersWhat will my client gain?
We'll set you a free e-mail account when youWhat does my client stand to lose by not using
purchase our 1-year plan.my service?
I'll send you my 20-page report when you sign upHow will my client feel after buying/using my
for my newsletterservice?
My office is fully equipped to fill your needs.What pain will it take away?
I've done research in this field and found ...What goal will my client achieve?
I am a member of these organizations: ...What desire does it fulfill?
What's wrong with these claims? AbsolutelyThe answer may be different for each target
nothing, if they are true. In fact, these aremarket, so it is important to know who your
features your clients should be aware of. Theyprospective clients are before asking yourself
are part of what you are offering (the "what" ofthese questions.
your business), but they are independent of yourBeing completely objective about your own
clients and their personal concerns.business is not easy; you've worked hard to build
Benefits are effective in attracting people becauseit and you know it inside out. Defining your
they speak to what they can gain personally.benefits from an outside perspective can enable
Once you have their attention, then you canyou to better understand how other people view
enhance your selling proposition with features.your business. Getting a view of your own "big
Features can close a sale, but they will usually notpicture" is something a professional business coach
be your client's first point of entry.can help you achieve.
Your benefits should:Whether you do it alone or get outside help, it
Show the value of your services,never hurts to think about what you have to
Tell your audience what problems you will solve,offer to potential clients. So, next time you're at
andthe grocery store, stop by the cereal aisle and
Describe what they stand to gain by doingask yourself: "What are MY 5 essential nutrients?
business with you